"The Choice", specially for Star Wars team

Dear J.J. Abrams and Star Wars team! This short movie was created to get any opportunity or advice about getting into film industry. My name is Nickita Budantsov. I'm really interested in cinema, making short movies since my childhood. I am doing fencing choreography as well. To show you a level of my skills and abilities I've create a fencing scene and directed this short movie with it. You can see my short message here: bit.ly/MSGtoSW I would appreciate any feedback.